Tuesday, October 19, 2010

What does this writing assignments

 Children, this assignment to write what? This is written in our textbooks is very clear, fast-opened the book and join us and see it -

read the text of the group, you must come to understand some of the features descriptive articles, learn some notes approach. The exercises, we practice writing descriptive articles.

you can choose to give you an item description, such as vegetables, fruits, toys, stationery, or appliances. Before the exercises, by observing, visit, visit, read the instructions, etc., as much as possible to understand this article, then think again, from what, according to the order of how to introduce, which shows the method can be used on . After writing

read to the students to listen, to see introduced is clear or not the ambiguities further changed.

2, What are the requirements of this assignment

The Project has four-point message:

1) choose a item can be introduced to you, such as vegetables, fruits , toys, stationery, or appliances.

2) Before the exercises, by observing, visit, visit, read the instructions, etc., as much as possible to know more about this product.

3) and then think about what can be, according to the order of how to introduce, which can be used on the description of the method.

4) After writing read to the students to listen, to see clearly with no introduction, is not clear where further changed.

3, to determine which one

his teacher to write: how, now you, I'm ready, ready to write which content?

children: I would like to introduce a vegetable.

children: I would like to take a toy.

children: I would like to introduce a kind of household appliances.

children: I would like to introduce a fruit.

Teacher: Dear kids, the contents of this varied assignments, think about which one you are most interested in the content, which you write.

Second, how to write

(to introduce a vegetable, fruit example)

1, I have some problems to figure out

children: Introduction of a vegetable, fruit, emphasis should be in every respect do you start?

Teacher: Introduction to a vegetable, fruit, key features can introduce shape, taste characteristics and growth characteristics.

children: Introduction to a vegetable, fruit, you can write?

Teacher: Introduction of a vegetable, fruit, should write their favorite, familiar, there is a unique experience of vegetables and fruits.

2, How can I start it

children: Introduction to a vegetable, fruit, what kind of theme should it?

Teacher: Introduction of a vegetable, fruit, should express their affection, to express their thoughts and feelings of love of his hometown.

children: Why introduce a vegetable, fruit, and is home to express their thoughts and feelings of love for it?

Teacher: Because you introduce a vegetable, fruit, must be a specialty of his hometown thing. Praise home a vegetable, fruit, not that the love of hometown?

want to clear them, then we can start a pen to paper.

3, way prompts:

children: Introduction to a vegetable, fruit, how to observe the experience?

Teacher: observation and description of fruits native home, we should note two points: First, prominent features, the second is to write feelings.

(a) catch on. Observe the fruits native home, the most important are what you should write. Articles written by, to give people a deep impression. If a class of fruits and vegetables to write an article written description of characteristics of leaves and branches should pay attention to fruit, if fruit is the key thing is written, you should write details of fruit; flower is the key if something is written, it should take long to write ... ... For example, we write tomatoes, fruit is the focus in the article, we should write detailed results. Such as leaves and flowers of other plants and should be well described, so write articles, give people a complete impression.

fruit characteristics of many features mentioned here, can be large, many, sweet, fragrant, crisp ... ... we can grab one or two important features to specific writing. For example, we have to describe his hometown of watermelon, one could do to arrange materials: first introduce the beginning of the name of watermelon, watermelon, and then more specific description of the characteristics of home, and then describe the specific characteristics of a good watermelon home, at the end of praise to express your own situation. For example, a child looked after the home cucumbers, is this description:

home I love cucumber

Shaanxi Li Meng

my father lived in the cave pool a local vegetable known experts, he planted the cucumbers always so lovable.

spring, rain rustling, cucumber vines seemed to suck the dew of Mother Earth, which bloom cheerfully. In early February, cucumber vines, 1 foot tall, and grandfather, grandmother was busy with one high bamboo scaffolding to the cucumber vines. Grown cucumber vine tendril-like From that point on, its vines to stand up along the length, the longer the high, the longer the stronger.

cucumber vines intertwined with its vines as thick as a thumb. Above the lateral with a small green leaves, like the distraction of the palm of your hand, take a piece of a very lush. Hairy leaves, your first touch, kinda pain too!

soon, cucumber vine in full flower, like the yellow trumpet, very dense. They you do not let me, I will not let you, attracted crowds of children singing bee, a quiet garden brought to life. A few days later, withered flowers, and grow from the flowers wither at the same size as a small caterpillar small cucumber, strange lovely.

over a week or two, go watch the cucumber, the cucumber has grown into a large cucumber. about l-foot-long cucumber, hanging vertically below the leaves, the cucumber vines are pulled back bent. Looking at roads cucumber, my mouth, to admire, pick one to wash, only to find there is a small puncture above it! I picked up a brush, wash and cucumber powdery mildew above the spines, bite, fragrant and crisp, very cool, and eat more like it.

cucumber thirst quenching, but also as food to eat, or beauty products too! Cucumber is the hometown people to get rich

observation Comment: This vivid and specific description of the growth of cucumber, both vine, leaf, flower, or cucumber, all tracing to life, it is love. If there is no long-term experience of rural life, did not carefully observe the growth process of cucumber, it is difficult to write such a true feeling, meaningful good article!

how and when to seize the characteristic?

1) observe the color: for example, we have to observe the cucumber, can seize the cucumber leaves, flowers, stems, fruit color characteristics to the specific observation. There is such a child to observe and describe the characteristics of the color of cucumber:

the color of flowers: cucumber vine in full flower, like the yellow trumpet, very dense. They you do not let me, I will not let you, attracted crowds of children singing bee, a quiet garden brought to life.

was beautiful? Heart to see the color of a drunk! Write, of course, highlights the characteristics of the cucumber.

2) observe the shape. As long as they can see things, its Nature, such as curved crescent, round sunset,cheap UGG boots, rugged mountain, as a mirror of water, all give the impression that a distinct image. Observation and description of fruit trees, there are several ways the following: First, observe the shape of leaves, such as aspen leaves, oval-shaped. Second, Yu-shaped objects, that is shaped by the metaphor of this matter the shape of another object. If the plant is the heart-shaped leaves, palm-shaped, fan-shaped, needle-shaped, umbrella and so on. Second, observe the shape of fruit: Different fruits have different shapes, fruits and carefully describe the characteristics of the shape of fruits, but also a good way to tilting. Seize the fruit to specifically describe the shape, give people as reflected in its objects, vivid sense of realism. For example:

observe the shape of cucumber:

grown cucumber vine tendril-like From that point on, its vines to stand up along the length, the longer the high, the longer the stronger.

grow from the flower withers at another the same size as a small caterpillar small cucumber, strange lovely.

over a week or two, go watch the cucumber, the cucumber has grown into a large cucumber. about l-foot-long cucumber, hanging vertically below the leaves, the cucumber vines are pulled back bent.

observe the shape of the fruit of tomato stems and leaves:

its stem is green, very fine, a bit like a big green leaves in the shape of the peach; it open yellow flowers, like small speakers the same. Is a flat round tomatoes, and apples the same size.

wow! This observation and description, can not it interesting? Not seen as people who saw.

children: Introduction to a vegetable, fruit, what better way to do that?

teacher: Dear children, do you have any good home a souvenir it? What melons produced it? What fruit grow it? What are the special vegetables? You do not carefully observed? You understand their characteristics? If you write an article praising your hometown native, famous product, you are able to write it? In fact, the native home to write an article on the article is not difficult. The key is you is not know it, you are not seriously looked at it. Description of native fruits

home, the most important are what you should write. Articles written by, to give people a deep impression. If a class of fruits and vegetables to write an article written description of characteristics of leaves flowers and fruits to pay attention, if the fruit is the key thing is written, you should write details of fruit; flower is the key if something is written, it should take long to write ... ... For example, we write tomatoes, fruit is the focus in this article, we should write detailed results. Such as leaves and flowers of other plants and should be well described, so write articles, give people a complete impression. How can we highlight the features of it?

Description Color: carefully written description of the characteristics of the color of fruits is a good way of tilting. For example, we write cucumber, can seize the cucumber leaves, flowers, stems, fruit characteristics to the specific color of paint. There is such a child the color of description of the characteristics of cucumber:

Chuxian Shi color: I came to the greenhouse, only the surface of a green, green cucumber seedlings, and full of many small yellow flowers, good-looking great.

the color of the leaves: the leaves are green, as if to come out of the oil-like and shimmering turquoise.

the color of flowers: stamens with pollen like a rouge general.

melon color: fall from the shelf a few small drops of water crystal clear, when out on the yellow claws, drops immediately into the transparent jade general.

was beautiful? Heart to see the color of a drunk! Write, of course, highlights the characteristics of the cucumber.

describe the shape: Different fruits have different shapes, carefully describe the characteristics of the shape of fruits, but also a good way to tilting. Seize the fruit to specifically describe the shape, give people as reflected in its objects, vivid sense of realism. For example:

write the shape of cucumber:

below the flower grows in a small cucumber, about the thickness of the small finger as a dozen centimeters long. Above a small burr cucumber and touches not very difficult to handle.

write the shape of the fruit of tomato stems and leaves:

its stem is green, very fine, a bit like a big green leaves in the shape of the peach; it open yellow flowers, like small speakers the same.

is flat round tomatoes, and apples the same size.

wow! Such a description, can not it interesting? Not seen as people who saw.

describe the taste: the taste of fruits and description, write good, but also highlight the characteristics of native good way. For example, we do not eat tomatoes, as long as you see the following passage will drool:

open bite did not ripe tomatoes, you will see rows of densely packed seeds, then your mouth feel bitter and astringent; ripe tomatoes sweet and sour, delicious. If you eat tomatoes is about to mature, will feel the exciting moment Ma; eat ripe tomatoes, Tianjin Jin, and Jiaoren sharpen want to eat more to eat. Eat tomatoes to eat less, or your teeth will be down by acid. If the tomatoes cut into pieces, then mix with sugar, and taste to not mention a variety of it! During the winter, tomatoes can also buy in the market. Eat tomatoes in winter, it is not a good feeling.

(b) Write down the description of the feelings

fruits native home, to bring their feelings to write, to write their own deep thoughts and feelings to loving home. For our children, the key is how to write their own deep feelings to.

In fact, tilting the process is not difficult to write their feelings, pay attention to clever use of some rhetoric, try to write the articles written vividly interesting. For example, we want to describe his hometown of tomatoes:

drizzle, Yi Keke tomato plants stretched waist. Its stalk is green, very thin, green leaves in a bit like a large peach shape; it open yellow flowers, like the trumpet the same.

you see, write to, the personification of the tomatoes, so much fun ah! Again you have to describe

Lychee:

lychee tree to bear fruit the first small and green, then slowly grew red, heavy clusters, the branches pressure doubled up. Yes it blushing face like lychees girl, pull off the leaves to cover his face.

here, lychees will shy too! Feelings of love, do not read between the lines flow is it?

1) introduced a vegetable, fruit, how to write at the beginning of it?

introduced a vegetable, fruit, written at the beginning of the method is varied. Here, I introduce to you one of the most practical way is straight to the point. Such as:

My favorite vegetable is tomatoes.

short, concise neatly into the issue.

2) introduced a vegetable, fruit, how to write at the end of it?

introduced a vegetable, fruit, many ways to the end. Such as:

A. Law

how to ask? After listening to my presentation, you like grapes it?

B. Lyrical method

You see, back home, how much loved red pepper ah! I love the hometown of the red pepper.

C. Praise law

ages really good tomatoes, vegetables, yo!

D. Summary in

Watermelon not only to bring home a food, but also for the development of his hometown to make a significant contribution to the economy, many farmers are getting rich by planting watermelon.

3) introduced a vegetable, fruit, and how quickly the idea of drafting it?

describing the fruit home specialty, in general, are things we are more familiar,UGG boots cheap, it should be easy to write. Here are several articles available for children tricks of models for reference practice.

① Total write tree: name → → minutes to write the total write tree fruit (shape + color + flavor)

use this method to write a kind of fruit trees, should do to organize material. What to write first introduced at the beginning of fruit trees, and then describe the overall characteristics of fruit trees, followed by specific descriptions of the characteristics of fruit, sub-shape, color,Bailey UGG boots, taste specific description of three aspects. In this way, can try to write all kinds of fruit trees.

② growth process by writing: name → growth (spring summer → autumn →) → end (lyrics)

use this method to describe the fruits and vegetables can be. The beginning of the article is a first overview of what to write clearly and fruits, that is to explain clearly the name. Then the order to press to describe the growth process, the germination of spring, summer growth, the maturity of ... ... at the end of the fall, to express your own thoughts and feelings, not that great article that?

③ section write: name → growth → end → nutritional uses (lyrical praise)

this art of composition is very similar to the one above, but more than a paragraph of text, that is, to write a

④ Category writes: Name → Features 1 (Multi) + Features 2 (good) ... ... + at the end (lyrics)

is written this way the characteristics of many fruits, to seize one or two important features to specific writing. The characteristics mentioned here, can be large, many, sweet, fragrant, crisp ... ... For example, we have to describe his hometown of watermelon, one could do to arrange materials: first introduce the beginning of the name of watermelon, followed by specific descriptions of his hometown of watermelon and more characteristics, more specific description of the watermelon and good home, at the end to express admiration for yourself. This written four paragraphs, not a very good article writing is to it?

tricks of the above, the The end of the lyrics, is the end of the article, to express admiration for what, by of lyric, to express feelings of love for his hometown. The middle of several parts, not the same.

three, excellent reading assignments appreciate

break rolls, getting a god. Read other people's good writing, we can learn a good way of others. Read the following article, think about what you gain or inspiration.

Liwen A:

cucumber readme

Guangxi Zhu Song

My name is cucumber, is a colorful vegetables, a citizen of the kingdom. You said a bit like me and cucumber? Of course, both of us had the whole family thing is the blood. Upon my honor you say, cucumber is my old-timers. I improved varieties of cucumber. In fact, cucumber

and I still have quite a large difference, at least my image is much more than it is cool: cucumber dressed in a rustic year-round brain coat, dark colors do not say, did not type paragraph , a point above the decorations are not naked; you look at it I cucumber, an avant-garde style, full of youthful vigor exudes green windbreaker, above Do not worry, it by no means a small cactus thorn as fierce, without causing bloodshed. My temper is much more than cattle cucumber, cucumber early in the spring could not wait listing, and I always stick to it willingly fall fruitful ground planes. However, if in the shed, my character on the Of course, big temper makes sense - my physique is much stronger than the cucumber, fine to have it picked up a pound of multiple!

Though I look not very good, but the melon is not profiling, I focus on is the My nutrition is very rich in vegetables and vitamin C content is said to list on the top.

people like me, the reason. Some said: raw cucumber crisp and refreshing, if the biopsy came alive again in its point of vinegar, sugar, pepper, wu the United States played what, it is cooked food is delicious, whether stir-fried, soup, are a nutritious cuisine, comparable with delicacies! There are beauty who strongly complimented my thumbs. Cucumber is authentic authentic natural skin care products, whitening of the miraculous, if often cucumber slices cheek. Do not say you can remove the face of a record spot flaws, even if you are a black tornado can turn you into a white tornado.

ah! I have so much skill it? Silence like I have to, Do not be so unassuming thing, so I had cucumber melon one by one will blush red thing. On the experience of looking for the advantages:

reading this essay, do you like the cucumber it? Why, with such a novel form of the language so interesting to introduce a vegetable, really attractive ah! It turned a mundane vegetables can also be written in such interesting; the original, writing in the world is filled with all kinds of wonderful imagination, ah! Ground brain as long as you, diligence and write, you must also write a good essay to different.

Liwen II:

my beloved telescope

Zhejiang Jing

my house there are many new and interesting toys, electric cars, will be acrobatic play a small plane ... ... I like these. However, my favorite is that frame on the small bookcase in the astronomical telescope. Uncle Wang

because it is a friendly neighbor of Japan, from the narrow strip of water to bring my gift.

remember the A door, Uncle Wang on smiling and said: you, a good gaze at the stars and the moon, also grew up to study the universe!

Uncle Wang to help me open the box, while the side loading introduced to me. It turned out that the telescope in two parts. The first part is the single-tube telescope tube. The middle tube is silver white, smooth shiny, to illuminate my little face. Two are black, filled with lenses. Called the objective lens in front of a large. Usually, there are even a protective lens cover, the back and at right angles to the eyepiece tube. Interestingly, there is also a tube like a pen the size of a sight. It Yeah, not only more beautiful telescope, but also helped me to more quickly find the moon and the stars. The second part is golden tripod telescope tube, which is a shiny black plastic with three legs will be shot, two small metal screws will be linked to the telescope and tripod, a look also like a rough-the-art machine-gun it . I looked at listening and kept nodding.

Unfortunately, since the home for three days are cloudy, I am anxious straight stomp. Finally the fourth day of clearing up. Night, my mother brought me hope for a long time, May be this time, my heart has long been firmly attracted telescope went. Mom and Dad gone, I carefully installed the telescope, and then lowers, Gong Zhaoyao, quietly overlooking the camera point of view. First saw the house window frame, and then the darkness like the night sky. Ah, finally appeared in front of the moon, the moon was round and bright!

a full moon on a black and craters, and then a shift lens, it is the sky the stars blink of an eye, as embedded in the glowing pearl on black velvet, like the mysterious old man planted a bunch of the universe string of enticing question mark. Looked and looked, my eyes confused. Look at the moon, the moon not so bleak. I seem to see the dance sister E, Wu Gang osmanthus trees grab axes ... ... I like the light with the telescope in the shot, chasing fly in the sky ... ... visions, one day I could God, to the moon,UGG shoes, then this telescope take a look at our planet, the motherland of the Great Wall, lovely home, and that the more beautiful, ah!

my favorite is the rare astronomical telescope, it gives me fitted with a On the experience of looking for the advantages

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of the telescope and automatic assault rifles, electric cars, will play a small aircraft acrobatics compare toys, and my favorite is the telescope. Clearly, the telescope of, in addition to fun, but also another favorite cause. Using comparative approach, the design of suspense, and enhance the attractiveness of reading.

Liwen three:

refrigerator readme

Hunan Zhou Yingzi

Hi! I have no intention of licensing is a refrigerator. I have one meter tall Sixth Five-Year, wearing a white coat red edge. The owner is taking care of me, every day, my polished. I like a beautiful princess, stood proudly in a corner of the living room.

up and down my body is divided into two parts. Just open the door of my upper body, you will find an air-blowing. Summer sun baked the earth, and young master the self-made ice cream on here, or from a piece of ice out of touch here, cool off. Here the hostess will also put some fresh meat.

the lower part of my body I have a big appetite, many foods can be frozen. My lower body has three shelves on the door. The first layer is a plastic shelf in many a nest, put the egg is used. Eggs in here, both safe and fresh. Second, the three can put some small food. There is a four-door food shelf. Hostess often some delicious dishes, fruit, biscuits and other things on top.

listened to my presentation, you will think that my skill is not a small bar. In fact, in the refrigerator family, I only considered a sort of a small angle of children. There burly my brother, have small brother, and their ability to have large one. I believe that as science and technology development, I have more brothers and sisters better.

in the modern family, I became an indispensable household appliances. Convenient for human beings, send happy, my heart Bengtiyouduo happy. On the experience of looking for the advantages

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lively, coherent article.

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